TASK 10 VIDEO DRAMA(ROLEPLAY)

The story of “Batu Belah Batu Bertangkup ‘or The Big Haunted Rock

The story of “Batu belah batu bertangkup ‘or the big haunted rock was a very famous story in Malay community.  The story was about a very poor husband and wife. The Husband name kantan and the wife name Tanjung. They done weaving matt, catch fish and working at paddy field to support their daily lives. One day. They went to jungle to find some vegetables for dinner; suddenly they heard a very scary loud noise.  Kantan told Tanjung that the sound was came from the Big Haunted rock that his grandfather has told him when he was small. Few years later, they were blessed with two children, a daughter named Melor and boy named Pekan. However, they father passed away when the children still small. This make the Tanjung had to raise the children alone and this make her very stressed. One day the Tanjung went to the river to fishing and she was lucky to catch Tembakul fish. Tanjung was craving for the fish egg. She was very happy. She asked Melor to cook the fish and the egg fish and ask Melor to keep little bit of the egg for her as she went to bathing. After the egg fish was cooked, Melor give half to her brother Pekan and keep half for her mother. Pekan insists to have more egg fish. He keep crying and forcing his sister to give him the egg. Now the egg was finish eaten all by Pekan. Melor find chicken egg to replace the fish egg. Tanjung was so angry when she knew the fish egg already finish. She was so sad and feels that the children not love her. Tanjung without thinking any further she goes out and run to the big haunted rock. She crying and keep asking the big haunted rock eat and swallow her because she cannot eat the fish egg. Melor and Pekan go after they mother and try to stop her, but it was too late when they arrived in front of the cave because Tanjung already been eaten by the haunted rock.  Melor and Pekan was crying until they fell asleep.  Melor and Pekan meet an old women when they stop to rest. The Old women bring them to stay with her. Since then Melor and pekan lives with the old women until they grown up. Melor become beautiful and clever while pekan become hensome and succesful with his chicken fighting  games. The king fall in love with Melor and proposed to her  as his Queen. While Pekan married with a beautiful princess after his chicken beat the king chicken. One day the king saw his Queen look glommy and sad. King wants to know what makes his Queen sad and asked her. Melor told the king that she was sad because she thought of her mother. She told her mother was killed by the big haunted rock. King asks his man to destroy the haunted rock. Since that time they never heard the scary loud noise anymore.

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Once open a time, there is a poor husband and wife lived in the jungle. The Husband called Kantan and the wife is Tanjung. They had done farming, weaving matt; work on paddy field and fishing to make a living. One very fine day, they were looking for some vegetables in the jungle when they heard a Very loud and very scary. Kantan then told Tanjung that the voice actually came from a big haunted rock as his father told him when he was small.

Tanjung: “husband did you hear that noise? That noise very scary. What was that? Where is came from?

Kantan: Oh dear, my father told me, the sound come the the Big haunted rock.

 (Kantan then told Tanjung that the voice actually came from a big haunted rock as his father told him when he was small.)

Few years later Tanjung and Kantan was blessed with two children. The girl named Melor and the boy name Pekan. However Kantan did not make it. He was passed away when his children still small. Tanjung was very sad and lost.

One day Tanjung went to the river to fishing. She was happy when she catches a Tembakul fish as she was craving for the fish egg. Tanjung hurry up goes back home and ask Melor to cook the fish egg. 

Tanjung: “I want to go bath for a while, please take good care of you brother Pekan”.

Melor: “yes Mother”.

After Melor cook the fish egg, she gives half to Pekan and another half she keep for her mother. But Pekan not gets enough. He was forcing his sister to give him more of the fish egg. Eventually all the egg was eaten by Pekan.

Pekan: “I want eat the fish egg! Please sister! Please!

Melor: “but this is left for mother, Pekan.”

Pekan: “I don’t care! I want to eat!”

Melor: “oh no! The egg is finish. Oh my God, what shall I do, mother must be angry. I better cook the chicken egg as replacement”.

Tanjung already came home. She looks happy and ready to eat.  Melor look so pale and she scared her mother will scolded her. She opens the food cover and only saw a chicken egg. She so angry and so sad because cannot eat the fish egg that she craving all this while.

Tanjung: “Melor, where is my fish egg? Did you left it for me as a ask you to do?”

Melor: “Mother, I’m sorry, the fish egg was finish eaten by Pekan. He was forcing me to give him the other half. I told him that was for you, but he didn’t listen. Mother I already cooks the chicken as replacement”.

Tanjung: “how could you do that to me? Don’t you love me? I so upset with you. I better let the haunted rock eat and swallow me.

Tanjung without thinking futher go out and run toward to the Haunted Rock. She was crying and keeps talking to the haunted rock to eat her.

Tanjung: “haunted rock please eats and swallows me. I cannot eat tembakul fish egg. 

Melor and Pekan run after they mother.

Melor: “Mother please don’t go, please forgive us mother, please wait for us mother”. 

Tanjung didn’t care to hear her children yelling, she keeps running toward the haunted rock and finally the rock eats her as her wish. It’s too late for her children to save her from the Haunted Rock. Melor and Pekan crying and call for they mother until they fall as sleep.  The old women approach them.

Nenek Kebayan: Children, what are you doing here?

Melor: we are resting from long journey. Who are you old women?

Nenek Kebayan: Just call me nenek kebayan. You two look tired and hungry come follow me to my house.

Melor and Pekan follow the old women to her tent. She gave them food and water to drink. Since then Melor and Pekan stay with the nenek kebayan.

Few years later, Melor and Pekan had grown up. Melor become beautiful and clever. Pekan becomes handsome and successful with his chicken fighting games.

The king falling in loves with Melor beauty and kindness. He proposed her to become is Queen. Melor was married to the king. Pekan beat the king chicken fighting and the rewards he was married to the princess.

One day, The King saw Melor look very down and sad. The king wonders what make his Queen act like that. The king asks Melor what happen.  Melor told the king what was happen to her mother. The King asks his man to go to the Haunted Rock and destroyed it. Since that day, the loud noise and scary voice from the cave never been heard again.

The End

UFS 211 UNIT 10 ACADEMIC READING TASK 9

SUMMARIZE THE TEXT GIVEN BY THE LECTURER AND POST IT IN YOUR BLOG

LIE DETECTOR

SUMMARY

screening, investigating thefts, and even periodic staff checks. The PSE works by analysing this infrasonic FM component. Dector claims that the muscle tightening occurs very quickly, and can change a word to the next. Dektor emphasises that the device only shows stress, not dishonesty. There may be a privacy bill from UK government, and hopefully it will include the use of the lie detectors.

(100 WORDS) 

UFS 211 UNIT 9 EDITING AND REVISING TASK 8

CAST AWAY 

SYNOPSIS

The movie was about a man who got stranded because the fed-ex plane that they were on had a turbulence and crashed down to the pacific ocean. john survived the crash and hold on to the raft until he was wash by the wave to the nearest island. When he woke up, he watched around him and start to pick up the fed-ex boxes that was wash by the wave to the shore. He start to call for help but no one anwer. He even wrote a HELP sign on the shore so that anyone who is near the island might saw it, but sadly it was washed away by the tides. He manage to open the coconut with a piece of sharp edge rock  that he gotten when smashing a a block of rock to another.  He wasn’t able to drink the sea water because it was too salty. Then he started walk around the island and discover a well hidden cave from the other side of the island. When he reach the top of the hill, he saw a body that was brought by the wave near a huge block of rock. Its was one of the pilot and he was dead. John buried him and took a flashlight  and the shoe from the dead man’s body and buried him and wrote him an epitaph. He try the shoe but it was a little bit tight but he cut the front of the shoe. The next day, he try to escaped the island with the raft that save him but the huge tide pushed him back. When he was washed again and again by the wave,  his right leg got hit on the sharp rock beneath the ocean and he was injured badly. He start to open  all the fed-ex box except for the ones that has angel wings on it. He discover a Wilson ball, tapes, a dress and even a skate. He save all the item for future use. Then he carved a face to the ball and make the ball his companion to talk. After that he start to make fire but at first he got injured badly but for the second time he manage to make fire and was very happy. After that he sleep in the cave that he discovered earlier. 4 years later,  he was very skilful  on catching fish and on other things. He start to make raft and head off to the ocean and he manage to go through the wave. After a few days on the rough ocean, a container ship was passing by and he was saved. When he got back, he was celebrated by the people and soon he search for his lover but he found out that she was married and had 1 kid. He went to see her at her home and she was happy to see him. She told him that she had search him and she had gave up. But at last he forgive him and he went back. the day that he want to send the package that had saved his life, there was no one there but at the end he found the owner of the place but he didn’t notice at first. He suddenly saw the logo on the truck and he knew that was the owner. He walk to the centre of the road and think for awhile, that’s when he know what path he suppose to took. So the moral of the story is that when we still had our life or given a second chance, took the road that you can benefit till the end.

UFS 211 UNIT 7 THE NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH-1 TASK 7

GRADED ASSIGNMENT (10%)

Topic   : the food that i like
Topic sentence   : my favorite food is karamell almondo ice cream
Supporting details   : 1. reasonable and affordable price
                                2. varieties of toppings
                                3.healthy treat

Conclusion: karamell almondo ice cream is my favorite food which is a healthy treat with an affordable price.
Linkers/ sequence connectors used: firstly,secondly,last but not least, overall.


Paragraph:

    My favorite food would be ice cream from karamell almondo at the second floor from west atrium at 1Borneo hipermall near the Alamesra. firstly,it's a vanilla bean soft homemade ice cream with a reasonable price from RM2.65 to RM13.00. secondly, it has a varieties of fresh fruit toppings such as strawberry, banana and mango and creative dry toppings such as ferrero rochers chocolates,butter waffles, cone flakes, baked almond slice and granola. there are also chocolate and caramel syrup if prefer more sweeter taste. i love the summer cone cause it has no toppings and its on a delicious cone. i liked it plain because, i love the original vanilla bean taste. Last but not least, it is a healthy treat that everyone can enjoy because it has less sugar which makes it less sweet. overall, karamell almondo ice cream is my favourite food which is a healthy treat with an affortable price.

UFS211 UNIT 6 MECHANICS/GRAMMAR TASK 6

WHAT RAE THE COMMON MISTAKES THAT YOU ALWAYS DO IN WRITING? DO YOU FIND WRITING IN ENGLISH IS DIFFICULT?WHAT KIND OF PROBLEM DO YOU FACED WHEN YOU START WRITING? WHAT ARE YOUR SUGGESTIONS TO OVERCOME THE PROBLEM? DISCUSS.

the common mistakes that i always do in writing is that i cannot find a better transition and i often forgot to include prove to each of my points. sometimes i often forget to watch my tense whether its past or present. i find writing in english is a bit difficult as i thought cause you have to watch all the little details  and the correct way to write. when i start writing, i often repeat the things that i have already stated(repetition) and sometimes i cannot find a suitable words for me to elaborate my writings. my suggestion to overcome my problem is try to write more with the correct writing order and read more books for my reference.

UFS211 UNIT5 WRITING A PARAGRAPH-1: TASK 5

Topic sentences: the causes of air pollution
supporting sentences:

• manufacturing
• burning of fossil fuels
• carbon monoxide

concluding sentences: air pollution are causes by, manufacturing, burning fossil fuels and carbon monoxide.


   air pollution is one of the most serious concern around the globe. first and for most,is due to manufacturing. this source of pollution spread matter particle and chemicals direct to the atmosphere.the exhaust from the factory shots out chemical particle such as carbon monoxide, sulfur dioxide, and nitrogen into the atmosphere which can cause people to inhale dangerous toxin that can cause severe illness and can also link to cancer. secondly, is the burning of fossil fuels.as most people know fossil fuels burning comes from cars,jet planes, heavy load truck and lots more no matter whether its industrial or commercial cause. it increase the amount of asthma, risk of lung cancer and even increase the chance of having a new born child with congenital defect. last but not least, carbon monoxide. carbon monoxide is a very harmful gas particle that can effect our health. carbon monoxide not just come from industrial but also from the human daily life. it comes mostly from fuel burning appliance such as water heater, wood stove, gas stove, refrigerator and also hairspray. therefore, air pollution are causes by, manufacturing,burning fossil fuels and carbon monoxide.

UFS211:UNIT 4:INTRODUCTION OF A PARAGRAPH: TASK 4

in writing process there are few main points that is a must in producing a good writing.below are the points and the explaination to the process.

#PRE-WRITING
 in pre-writting, there are four(4) things that you should consider in writing. firstly, choose a topic.the topic should be something that you are interest with, something that you want to say about and a topic that you can sustain. secondly, gather information about the topic that you have choosen.doing research on the topic is a must. then, get familiar with the topic that you have choosen. try to understand all about the topic and all the elements needed regarding on the topic. lastly, narrow your topic. mark down the important things that you want to include or the main point on the topic.

#FREE WRITING
free writing is when you draw out the point or the main frame to your writing. this includes exploring the thing you know and think. in pre writing, brain storming and mind mapping is the easier way to draw out the points that you want to include in your writing.example of brain storming and mind mapping are as below:

 references are also important in writing. you can find references about your topic on the internet , library, and even newspaper.

#REVISING
revising is all about content and the organization of all the point.
-beginning
beginning of every writing indicates the topic or subject of the paper. it introduce your point of view on the topic and the beginning of every story, blog or article, arouses the readers interest.

-body
this is where you provides a futher details of your topic based on the research that you had to develop your topic. it may consist of description , analysis, and explaination. the uses of information and supporting evidence is a must to give prove on your thesis.

-ending/conclusion
ending or conclusion is the act of ending the thesis and to summarize the main ideas/topic. conclusion  are given according to the topic and it ends the paper. massage to readers also may be included.


topic sentences

• the cause of global warming
• how ciggarate effects people
• how water pollution effects the living creature of the ocean

supporting sentence

• the increasing amount of open burning and illegal logging.
• cancer
• oil spills causes many under water creatures unable to breath due to the oil.

concluding sentence

• so by decreasing open burning and illegal logging helps to prevent and decrease the cause of global warming.
• ciggarate effects the people and so, cause death illness such as cancer.
• and so, water pollution such as oil spill is how effect the living creature of the ocean.