GRADED ASSIGNMENT (10%)
Topic : the food that i like
Topic sentence : my favorite food is karamell almondo ice cream
Supporting details : 1. reasonable and affordable price
2. varieties of toppings
3.healthy treat
Conclusion: karamell almondo ice cream is my favorite food which is a healthy treat with an affordable price.
Linkers/ sequence connectors used: firstly,secondly,last but not least, overall.
Paragraph:
My favorite food would be ice cream from karamell almondo at the second floor from west atrium at 1Borneo hipermall near the Alamesra. firstly,it's a vanilla bean soft homemade ice cream with a reasonable price from RM2.65 to RM13.00. secondly, it has a varieties of fresh fruit toppings such as strawberry, banana and mango and creative dry toppings such as ferrero rochers chocolates,butter waffles, cone flakes, baked almond slice and granola. there are also chocolate and caramel syrup if prefer more sweeter taste. i love the summer cone cause it has no toppings and its on a delicious cone. i liked it plain because, i love the original vanilla bean taste. Last but not least, it is a healthy treat that everyone can enjoy because it has less sugar which makes it less sweet. overall, karamell almondo ice cream is my favourite food which is a healthy treat with an affortable price.
Tuesday, July 31, 2012
UFS211 UNIT 6 MECHANICS/GRAMMAR TASK 6
WHAT RAE THE COMMON MISTAKES THAT YOU ALWAYS DO IN WRITING? DO YOU FIND WRITING IN ENGLISH IS DIFFICULT?WHAT KIND OF PROBLEM DO YOU FACED WHEN YOU START WRITING? WHAT ARE YOUR SUGGESTIONS TO OVERCOME THE PROBLEM? DISCUSS.
the common mistakes that i always do in writing is that i cannot find a better transition and i often forgot to include prove to each of my points. sometimes i often forget to watch my tense whether its past or present. i find writing in english is a bit difficult as i thought cause you have to watch all the little details and the correct way to write. when i start writing, i often repeat the things that i have already stated(repetition) and sometimes i cannot find a suitable words for me to elaborate my writings. my suggestion to overcome my problem is try to write more with the correct writing order and read more books for my reference.
the common mistakes that i always do in writing is that i cannot find a better transition and i often forgot to include prove to each of my points. sometimes i often forget to watch my tense whether its past or present. i find writing in english is a bit difficult as i thought cause you have to watch all the little details and the correct way to write. when i start writing, i often repeat the things that i have already stated(repetition) and sometimes i cannot find a suitable words for me to elaborate my writings. my suggestion to overcome my problem is try to write more with the correct writing order and read more books for my reference.
UFS211 UNIT5 WRITING A PARAGRAPH-1: TASK 5
Topic sentences: the causes of air pollution
supporting sentences:
- manufacturing
- burning of fossil fuels
- carbon monoxide
air pollution is one of the most serious concern around the globe. first and for most,is due to manufacturing. this source of pollution spread matter particle and chemicals direct to the atmosphere.the exhaust from the factory shots out chemical particle such as carbon monoxide, sulfur dioxide, and nitrogen into the atmosphere which can cause people to inhale dangerous toxin that can cause severe illness and can also link to cancer. secondly, is the burning of fossil fuels.as most people know fossil fuels burning comes from cars,jet planes, heavy load truck and lots more no matter whether its industrial or commercial cause. it increase the amount of asthma, risk of lung cancer and even increase the chance of having a new born child with congenital defect. last but not least, carbon monoxide. carbon monoxide is a very harmful gas particle that can effect our health. carbon monoxide not just come from industrial but also from the human daily life. it comes mostly from fuel burning appliance such as water heater, wood stove, gas stove, refrigerator and also hairspray. therefore, air pollution are causes by, manufacturing,burning fossil fuels and carbon monoxide.
UFS211:UNIT 4:INTRODUCTION OF A PARAGRAPH: TASK 4
in writing process there are few main points that is a must in producing a good writing.below are the points and the explaination to the process.
#PRE-WRITING
in pre-writting, there are four(4) things that you should consider in writing. firstly, choose a topic.the topic should be something that you are interest with, something that you want to say about and a topic that you can sustain. secondly, gather information about the topic that you have choosen.doing research on the topic is a must. then, get familiar with the topic that you have choosen. try to understand all about the topic and all the elements needed regarding on the topic. lastly, narrow your topic. mark down the important things that you want to include or the main point on the topic.
#FREE WRITING
free writing is when you draw out the point or the main frame to your writing. this includes exploring the thing you know and think. in pre writing, brain storming and mind mapping is the easier way to draw out the points that you want to include in your writing.example of brain storming and mind mapping are as below:
references are also important in writing. you can find references about your topic on the internet , library, and even newspaper.
#REVISING
revising is all about content and the organization of all the point.
-beginning
beginning of every writing indicates the topic or subject of the paper. it introduce your point of view on the topic and the beginning of every story, blog or article, arouses the readers interest.
-body
this is where you provides a futher details of your topic based on the research that you had to develop your topic. it may consist of description , analysis, and explaination. the uses of information and supporting evidence is a must to give prove on your thesis.
-ending/conclusion
ending or conclusion is the act of ending the thesis and to summarize the main ideas/topic. conclusion are given according to the topic and it ends the paper. massage to readers also may be included.
topic sentences
- the cause of global warming
- how ciggarate effects people
- how water pollution effects the living creature of the ocean
- the increasing amount of open burning and illegal logging.
- cancer
- oil spills causes many under water creatures unable to breath due to the oil.
- so by decreasing open burning and illegal logging helps to prevent and decrease the cause of global warming.
- ciggarate effects the people and so, cause death illness such as cancer.
- and so, water pollution such as oil spill is how effect the living creature of the ocean.
UFS211 UNIT 3 PROCESS WRITING: TASK 3
in writing process there are few main points that is a must in producing a good writing.below are the points and the explaination to the process.
#PRE-WRITING
in pre-writting, there are four(4) things that you should consider in writing. firstly, choose a topic.the topic should be something that you are interest with, something that you want to say about and a topic that you can sustain. secondly, gather information about the topic that you have choosen.doing research on the topic is a must. then, get familiar with the topic that you have choosen. try to understand all about the topic and all the elements needed regarding on the topic. lastly, narrow your topic. mark down the important things that you want to include or the main point on the topic.
#FREE WRITING
free writing is when you draw out the point or the main frame to your writing. this includes exploring the thing you know and think. in pre writing, brain storming and mind mapping is the easier way to draw out the points that you want to include in your writing. references are also important in writing. you can find references about your topic on the internet , library, and even newspaper.
#REVISING
revising is all about content and the organization of all the point.
-beginning
beginning of every writing indicates the topic or subject of the paper. it introduce your point of view on the topic and the beginning of every story, blog or article, arouses the readers interest.
-body
this is where you provides a futher details of your topic based on the research that you had to develop your topic. it may consist of description , analysis, and explaination. the uses of information and supporting evidence is a must to give prove on your thesis.
-ending/conclusion
ending or conclusion is the act of ending the thesis and to summarize the main ideas/topic. conclusion are given according to the topic and it ends the paper. massage to readers also may be included.
#PRE-WRITING
in pre-writting, there are four(4) things that you should consider in writing. firstly, choose a topic.the topic should be something that you are interest with, something that you want to say about and a topic that you can sustain. secondly, gather information about the topic that you have choosen.doing research on the topic is a must. then, get familiar with the topic that you have choosen. try to understand all about the topic and all the elements needed regarding on the topic. lastly, narrow your topic. mark down the important things that you want to include or the main point on the topic.
#FREE WRITING
free writing is when you draw out the point or the main frame to your writing. this includes exploring the thing you know and think. in pre writing, brain storming and mind mapping is the easier way to draw out the points that you want to include in your writing. references are also important in writing. you can find references about your topic on the internet , library, and even newspaper.
#REVISING
revising is all about content and the organization of all the point.
-beginning
beginning of every writing indicates the topic or subject of the paper. it introduce your point of view on the topic and the beginning of every story, blog or article, arouses the readers interest.
-body
this is where you provides a futher details of your topic based on the research that you had to develop your topic. it may consist of description , analysis, and explaination. the uses of information and supporting evidence is a must to give prove on your thesis.
-ending/conclusion
ending or conclusion is the act of ending the thesis and to summarize the main ideas/topic. conclusion are given according to the topic and it ends the paper. massage to readers also may be included.
UFS 211 unit 2:sentence structure-task 2
ØSIMPLE
SENTENCE STRUCTURE
SIMPLE SENTENCE CONSIST OF ONLY ONE CLAUSE
EXAMPLE OF SENTENCES:
- - - - ALI PLAYS CRICKET
- - - - MARY
LEARN ENGLISH
ØCOMPOUND
SENTENCES STRUCTURE
COMPOUND SENTENCE CONSIST OF TWO OR MORE INDEPENDENT
CLAUSE JOINT BY COORDINATING CONJUCTION SUCH AS ,”AND”, “BUT” AND “OR”
EXAMPLE OF SENTENCES:
- - - -LARRY WANTS TO PLAY, BUT HE STILL GOT HOMEWORK
TO DO.
- - - -CLARA CAN COOK; MOREOVER, SHE CAN PLAY THE
PIANO.
ØCOMPLEX
SENTENCES STRUCTURE
COMPLEX SENTENCE CONTAINS ONE INDEPENDANT CLAUSE AND AT
LEAST ONE DEPENDANT CLAUSE.
EXAMPLE OF SENTENCES:
- - - -ALTHOUGH MARY ANN WANTS TO GO OUTSIDE, IT’S
STILL RAINNING.
- - - - ALTHOUGH HE WANTS TO PLAY BASEBALL, HE WANTS TO
PLAY SOCCER TOO.
ØCOMPOUND-COMPLEX
SENTENCES
COMPOUND - COMPLEX SENTENCE IS MADE FROM TWO INDEPENDENT
CLAUSES AND ONE OR MORE DEPENDENT CLAUSES.
EXAMPLE OF SENTENCES:
- - - - ALTHOUGH I DON’T UNDERSTAND THE QUESTION, I
STRUGGLE TO ANSWER. I HAVE A REALLY HARD TIME TO DO IT.
- - - -BEN HAD A REALLY TOUGH DECISION TO MAKE. ONLY
ONE MOVIE TIKET LEFT; MOREOVER, HE HAS TO PICK LARA OR HENRY.
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